Why stainless steel water bottles are the best choice
What you drink from is important.
You'd probably never thought the choice of a water bottle was significant, but turns out there are a lot of different types. You can choose from aluminum, stainless steel or plastic. Your choice can affect you, your health and the environnement. This essay will argue that stainless steel water bottles are the best choice. I think they should only sell stainless steel waterbottles because they're re-usable, good for your health and can keep your water cold on a hot day.
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Why stainless steel water bottles are the best choice
1. Re-usable
- Helps environnement
- Saves money
- Lasts long (difficult to break or dent)
2. Safe for your health
- Plastic bottles (such as purelife) grow bacteria.
- Plastic bottles could also contain BPA which can cause prostate cancer.
- Other bottles leach DEHP after repeted use.
3. Keeps water cold
- Satisfying
- Refreshing
- Other bottles can't
Your third argument could use more information. You may want some sub-points to "other bottles can't". If you can prove this to be true then it should be a very strong paragraph.
ReplyDeleteYou need to be able to prove that only stainless steel can keep water cold.