Monday, December 20, 2010

Final Essay! :)

Why stainless steel water bottles are the best choice
What you store water in is important.
You'd probably never thought the choice of a water bottle was significant, but turns out there are a lot of different types and choices. You can choose from aluminum, stainless steel or plastic. Your choice can affect you, your health and the environnement. This essay will argue that stainless steel water bottles are the best option. I think they should only sell stainless steel waterbottles because they're re-usable, good for your health and can keep your water cold on a hot day.

Stainless steel water bottles are the best choice because they're re-usable. One benefit from re-usable water bottles are that they help the environnement in a tremendous way. For example, 65 million plastic bottles per year, accumulate in a landfill in Michigan. While a stainless steel water bottle can be used repeatedly and will last very long, because stainless steel is a tough metal and is difficult to break or dent. Also the cost of a whole pack of plastic water bottles is around 5$ and the cost or a re-usable bottle could be around 6$. Even if you have to pay a dollar more for a re-usable bottle, its worth it because it'll last way longer.
My second argument for that stainless steel watter bottles are the best choice, is because they're safe for your health. For example non re-usable plastic bottles (such as purelife) can get bent or creased very easily. What you may not have known is that in those creases the bottles grow bacteria. This will not happen with stainless steel bottles since they are made out of metal and not plastic. Also, did you know that most plastic bottles contain BPA, which is a material in the plastic which can get into the water you drink, which can cause prostate cancer. Also other bottles, besides stainless steel, leach DEHP after repeated use. Health effects from DEHP could cause liver cancer and some trouble reproducing. So, if you buy a stainless steel water bottle, it will for sure be better for your health
Finally, my last argument for why stainless steel bottles are the best choice is that they can keep your water cold. This is a satisfying and refreshing thing only stainless steel can do. It's also better for you're health, because when people freeze water in plastic bottles germs and traces of BPA can leach into the water.

In conclusion, I think stainless steel water bottles are the best choice, they've got everything you could ever want in a water bottle. They're efficient and the best buy because they're helping the environnement, saving you money, and protecting your health. They truly are the superb choice, and the best option for you.

1 comment:

  1. Be careful of redundancies. Each paragraph is its own unique argument. You don't want there to be much overlap. This way you can maintain the reader's attention and continue to provide new information.


    Also, in English the dollar sign precedes the number. In French it follows.

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